Today, after digging in for the long haul, we got down to business and had a good day. Nothing is more satisfying than a productive day. Nothing major accomplished. No projects finished (which is really all I mean by “nothing major accomplished.”) Just showed up and got down to it.
We had a conference call meeting at 12:15 with the young CE/Producer on the Sony Lot to discuss the treatment we just handed in – our take, basically, on that seed of an idea he pitched to us, about a month ago. One lesson we’ve learned and have gotten fairly decent at, is to continue to work hard, even in times of great change. Either change that brings us low (the option deal falling apart two months ago), or change that brings us way up with excitement (Last week’s events, for instance.)
It really can’t be overstated, but the one thing that will keep the typically anxious, self-defeating, insecure screenwriter somewhat sane in the turbulent sea of Hollywood is to always be onto the next project, not waiting for the results of the one that just went out. It’s really a matter of emotional sleight of hand – you were totally thrilled about that story you sent out. You completely sold yourself on it being the best thing you’ve ever done. But, now it’s out there – alone and unprotected. People, with your fate in their hands (or so you believe) will judge it (whether or not they have your fate in their hands, they will judge it – that much you can take to the bank.) What should you do? It’s common sense, but so many writer’s find it nearly impossible to do! What would you think? Transplant that excitement to something new! Something that’s the farthest it can be from going out there, alone and unprotected, something brand new and still chock full of possibilities!! Duh! (It took me a good decade of beating my head against the wall, and three years of grad school, to get this concept to even sink into my thick skull, let alone practice it in any fashion.) I think you get the point, though. You put your focus on the new, shiny object, so that when the old shiny object comes back, burnt to a crisp and bent in half, you aren’t completely devastated.
So this meeting was on something new. A feature idea that’s barely four double spaced pages, total. In the end, when it’s all stacked up and the outlines, character profiles, beat sheets, treatments, and drafts are written, I’m sure we’ll top out at 600 to 800 pages, maybe a few hundred more or less, but about there. So, you can see, it’s first steps – which is awesome. So fun. Waaaaaay better than sitting around, staring at the walls, wondering what everyone (our team) thinks of the two spec scripts we gave them. Waaaaaaaay better.
The meeting itself was fantastic. We got smart, considerate, challenging notes from and spitballed some ideas, deepening and tightening the skeleton of it, in a really comfortable collaborative fashion. Jason and I are pretty darn adept in the room developing things. We’ve shown some good skills at that in a couple of different situations. We feed off of each other’s mindsets and imaginations extremely well and both of us don’t have that need to be the one who gets the idea across. I’d say we’re both really excellent, natural team players. But, it’s thrilling to get a person on the other side of the table that has a confident opinion, is receptive to outside ideas, can give a note and remain flexible to what the note might spark – even if it’s something unexpected, and can keep an eye on tone, character and plot without letting it overburden the discussion. It was that kind of thrilling today. Always fun. And this is someone down at our level, a little bit further along than us, but still making a name for himself, too. He’s had good success and really is on a good trajectory to at least a strong career. So making this fan, of how we work and our writing, is excellent. It’s a seed that could bear fruit at any time over this project, or something down the line.
After the meeting, we got some errands (and pizza) in. Then we came back to my place and dove back into CLIPPED, which was the project we almost optioned, but it all fell apart a few months ago. CLIPPEd holds a special place in our hearts. It’s our baby. The one we really have an extreme amount of passion for, I mean we love all our scripts; but CLIPPED holds some kind of higher sway, even if unspoken, over us. But, we knew we had to take a good hard look at it. The script is meant as a one-hour TV Pilot script, for a television series, but it’s thirty pages too long. Which means the script had to go on a big time diet to drop those pages, before the big meeting next week, so we have something fresh to talk to our new TV Lit Agent, too. So, the past two days, we’ve been moving through CLIPPED, which has gone much better than either of us expected.
Instead of wholesale cutting of sequences, scenes, or even characters; we’ve simply taken a good look at the bloatedness of the scenes and writing and trimmed accordingly. We are on a good pace to bring it down to the required sixty pages by next thursday and make the story a hundred times leaner and easier to see as a show. Some cool things I’ve noticed about this process, though. For one, Jason and I don’t normally work or write in the same room, let alone together, out loud, talking back and forth. We’ve really clicked through this rewrite on this more traditional writing partner method (one computer, one room, two guys.) We’ve done good solid work. It’s slow going, though. Probably runs us four hours or so to go through about ten to twelve pages of script and winnow it down to half that through word choice and careful trimming of extraneous elements or repetitive writing, line by line.
The funny thing is we really thought this script was just amazing and in reading it over again as we go, I think I can speak for both of us and say – “Wow, I can’t believe we ever let anyone see this. It’s so bloated!” But we did and hear we are, relatively unscathed and a little wiser for it. We lived. And that’s all you really want from life, right?
Starting to get sleepy. We’ll have to resume tomorrow. Until then: Onward and upward! Tomorrow’s a brand new day. Plenty to do. Lots of enjoyment to earn.
Good Night!